https://www.warlight.net/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=46866

Thoughts?

I published it by mistake. Can it not be approved please?

https://www.warlight.net/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=46910

That was my mistake. This is the one I'm working on right now.

Noone cares :(

Well its done now click the second link to see it.

My suggestion would be to do the ships properly. Find an image on Google Images and trace it.

Wikicommons is the better option to do this - no licence problems.

https://www.warlight.net/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=46910

Boats done. Now what?

This map is kind of messy, it's hard to see what territories connect to the sea and where boni are.

https://www.warlight.net/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=46910

Castle connect to the sea

Added markers for castles that connect to the water
https://www.warlight.net/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=46910

Added borders to the baronies.

Borders have been re-sized and rearranged. Looks easy on the eyes now.

https://www.warlight.net/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=46910

Who would like to do a play test with me? Send me friend request and say your name here.

sure, i'll playtest it with you :)

hysterio

Honestly? This map is bad, really not clear at all what connects to what, and what bonuses associate with which territories.

From map requirement page:
"Players must be able to tell what territories connect just by looking at the map."

and

"When possible, bonus links should be placed near or on top of the bonus they correspond to."

I don't want to discourage you though. I like the style and with some cleaning it up it might be good, keep up the good work :)

Edited 8/21/2015 20:47:19

Well,i cant see anything...

Well it might looks a bit primitive but for a first attempt its okay.

The visuals are a little sloppy, and the bonuses are inconsistent. I can't imagine having a decent strategic game here, but perhaps this map could prove to have some interesting role play scenarios.

But the huge problem that must be fixed, are the territory links. Link the boats to which territories they connect to, or it shall be a very bad map.

I'm working on something a bit different now. This is scraped. http://i.imgur.com/2P4XwCY.png