"Bonus links must be placed next to or on top of the bonus they correspond to when possible."

As you can see in my link, I have fulfilled this. There are a few bonus links that cannot possibly be next to or on top of the bonus because there is no room, and they are clearly marked on the right of the map.

I feel this is a mistake by the person that reviewed my map.

https://www.warlight.net/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=49565

Good point, Mail Fizzer

I'm sure you could fit the small bonuses near the territories if you squeeze (I mean, there is plenty of room).

Missing connections:

Al Bayda ' -> Ahwar
Rad'aa -> Sayyan
Rad'aa -> Mabar
Al Luayyah -> Al Mahwit
Hajjar -> Khamir

I'm not sure if they're implented or not but there are a lot of territory corners that are located on a 4 lines cross meetpoint. It's confusing to think what's connected to what.

Also , the map really outbalances the west towards the east. I guess maybe that was your intention but this does not apply to casual games.

Those diagonals are meant not to connect to simulate the lack of roads connecting those regions. I could maybe squeeze those bonuses in but it would be uglier and harder to click what you want to click.