Hi,
i'm writing a mystery novel/paper for school and i need some help with the following
-Detective name(female)
-victim names
-Murderer name
-possible clues?

lana- detective
antoine, jorge, greg, amanda, and isabell- victims
the Joker- killers public name real name is jack Flynn
-clues
-white hankerchiefs with the jokers cartoon pic on it
a bloody footprint


thats what i got

-Make the Character names something "Punny". If all else fails, use actual names like 'Winston' or something intellectual (Sophia for female defectives because it is Punny and Intellectual).

-Motive should Money or Revenge.

-Death should seem natural, heart attack, but is a lethal untraceable poison like Potassium Cyanide (If I recall correctly it can not be traced).

-Clues such as the poison can be found on the actual suspects clothing etc.
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Also make a innocent suspect. Makes the story "flow" better.

I like the names, but Joker is to obvious if a evil person. However i was thinking about linking one of them to a couple cards left on the scene


some details about the story so far
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The detective is having a meeting with all "suspects"(one is killer)" they are in a conference room, it is winter, the killer will also be female

AWESOME GUY i like your idea, but the death will be from a chef's knife, or a blade of some kind, the motive is not yet decided but will most likely be insanity your clues are good though

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I believe love would be a better motive than money or revenge.

Perhaps give the other suspects their own individual motives which get investigated, ie: money, revenge etc etc.

good idea Sadness, the Murderer is now a man. i chose the name Detective Scarlett Rose Moore

Victim?

Victim full name could be:
Diana Sophia Roosevelt.
Murderer full name could be:
Kevin Luke Montclair.
Motive could be:Hate or jealousy
Clues could be:
A picture with half of it missing
half eaten cookie by victim

Finally something fun, new, and interesting on these forums!

I liked the idea of a female killer and also the idea of love as the motive, but I'm sure you guys are far more creative than I, so just stopped by to say I approve of this thread :P.

Good luck with your story!

"I'm Bishes and I approve this message." Lion thought elections over?

Novel: Gay love go wrong. Use warlight names. Richard Sharpe. J Russell. Anyone else with real name.

Title: Hell Bender and Summer of Sadness.

haha

Warflowvet should be the detective/hero/rolemodel
the murderer should definitely be lion, and a clue is the bites taken out of the victim(s)
motive: heh was hungry

Johns a good criminal name. Its decieving.

To me the character names depend on the settings. Is this during the 1800's, or during the noire movies of the 50's or today?

closer to this time like 2000

i like lions idea except the title should be the hellbender trilogy