I'm sadly not familiar with the books, but i find your map quite interesting.
First thing though, it's the archipelagoes in the North and North-east side of the map (from the "Reshi Isles" to "Dawn Shadow's") that are not part of any bonus, nor are territories. I imagine it's an artistic choice, but i suggest you changing the color to a darker one, since it's too similar to the usual grey that territories have and it confounds the user.
I'd also suggest you modify some of the bonus colors to a darker version, as some bonus borders are a bit difficult to be clearly recognized.
I went from Z to A: (<> = Bonuses - "" = Territories)
<West Jah Keved> and <Horneater Peaks> - "Valath" to "The Sighted Ocean Peak";
<Thanadel> and <Kholin> - "East Thanadal" missing connection to "Royal Kholin" - - - btw, are <Thanadel> and "Thanadal" both correct despite the different vowel?
<Tashikk> and <Lesser Azish States> - "East Tashikk" missing connection to "South Yezier";
<South Iri> - the "Iri Kasitor", "South Iri" and "East Iri" shapes may confuse people if whether these last two have to be connected or not;
<Rira> and <West Jah Keved> - "Riralia" missing connection to "Northgrip" - - - are <Keved> and "Kaved" both correct?
<North Iri> - "West Iri Form" missing connection to "Iri Eloria"
<Liafor> and <Lesser Azish States> - "North-East Liafor" missing connection to "South Yezier"
<Aimia> - "The Sleepless Isle" missing connection to "West Shin Mountains"
