Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-03-29 03:51:33 |
Cata Cauda
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Let be honest.
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-03-29 10:59:18 |
Red Λrmy
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Edited earlier summary to Don, not Dom... and yeah it will get rather long very fast but it's a mystery/thriller right? So minor details are always the clues :D Hopefully a summary wont keep being necessary.
Just by doing it, it helped me to consolidate events and characters... I'm bad with names lol and with all the names introduced relatively close together I kept forgetting who's who. (Also when the name Louis first appears spelt as Louise, theres no gender reference and I read it thinking it was some other girl, so I hope you won't mind me spelling it Louis.)
If I feel the need for more summaries, I'd only list events since the previous plus any changes to character personalities or Don's relationships.
Thanks for being cool about butchering your storytelling into bullet points :P
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-03-30 20:54:51 |
Okabe Rintarou ( AKA Hououin Kyouma)
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A : Take out my little friend kenny the baseball bat
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-03-30 22:11:09 |
Red Λrmy
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A. (They're fine.) Where's Amy?
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-03-31 12:46:41 |
Okabe Rintarou ( AKA Hououin Kyouma)
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-03-31 20:37:12 |
Okabe Rintarou ( AKA Hououin Kyouma)
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B (Intimidate slightly with my little friend kenny)
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-01 11:01:52 |
Okabe Rintarou ( AKA Hououin Kyouma)
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B (Okay Okay FINE !
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-01 12:43:51 |
Red Λrmy
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No not fine, shit just got real lol.
A. (May I be quite free and specific with decisions regarding our own character's speech?)
"Shut up, Ramone." I say dismissively; my gaze still upon Thomas and Tabby. "Amy is apparently abducted, and so I'm asking simple necessary questions, and I hope you all understand that." Once Thomas and Tabby look up at me I consider that truth acknowledged by the two of them, and without waiting for their answer, I turn to face Ramone. Picking up the responsibility so familiar to Amy, I struggle to find a hushed, calmer voice, so that only Leah can overhear me speak to him. "We're gonna need every last detail these two can give, whether we wait for help to arrive or start looking for Amy ourselves. There might not be time to 'leave them alone', and if it was you out there, Ramone, instead of Amy, you wouldn't want me to. And don't forget that just a moment ago, we three saw Casimir walk out this very front entrance, but sure as hell didn't see him on the god damned porch. He's still out there too, so take Leah, take the bat, and look out the back entrance for Casimir before locking it. Then double check the basement door and ground floor windows are still locked. Whoever that was seemed to head back into the woods, but still be careful locking the entrances... I'll stay with these two." I add while turning back to address Thomas and Tabby. I don't let Ramone answer me either, but he's always helpful. I see no reason why he'd fight me on this, and did not know Leah that well enough to just assume she'd take charge of the situation. I ran to the door, I opened it to let them in and I asked the questions; Leah could be overwhelmed, but I've only known her to be strong willed, so it more likely she's letting me take charge instead.
Addressing Thomas and Tabby, "That's all the time I can afford to give you to catch your breath; whoever that was looked like they backed off; probably once they saw they were outnumbered. You're safe with us in this Lodge, especially once Ramone is finished locking up." Finding my calmer voice more easily this time, I ask again, "So tell me where on the estate this happened; where each of you were, what specifically happened and how."
I think they are ready to answer me, but before they speak I glance over my shoulder to check Ramone has indeed chosen to be helpful, and that Leah has gone with him rather than let him go alone.
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-02 20:27:53 |
Genghis
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( I enjoy the enthusiasm, but I already have certain things intended based upon the available actions. If you were to add a thing or two like Okabe usually does, that'd be fine and I can work it into the mix with ease, but a full-fledged explanation of actions is less easy to implement)
"Shut up, Ramone" You tell the man. Ramone immediately takes a look of offense, and Thomas rises up from his terrified state, becoming the normal Thomas of brawn and strength rather this fearful form. "What did you say to me, Don?" Ramone asks. "You heard me quite well, Ramone. These people are easily suspicious. They come in here without Amy, and Casimir: why, where's Casimir? I bet you two killed him as well!" You say. Tabby as well rises in a defensive state, similar to Thomas and Ramone. The three of them surround you, with your grasp on the baseball bat oh-so-slightly wavering. "Guys, stop this!" Leah says. She works her way into the middle, between Thomas and yourself, attempting to diffuse the situation. "We can't be fighting like this! We need to-" Leah's speech is cut off by Ramone. "Don needs to leave. He has threatened us and tried to interrogate Thomas and Tabby." He says. You would feel shocked and wobbly. The whole situation is beginning to backfire in your face. You feel the need to say something in your defense. "Don, get out of here. Now." Thomas says. Leah walks away in defeat.
A. "What the hell is the matter with you?" B. "No no no, you have it all wrong!" C. "Please no, I apologize!"
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-02 20:39:41 |
Huitzilopochtli
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-02 21:02:54 |
Okabe Rintarou ( AKA Hououin Kyouma)
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A (PLEASE LET ME I BEG YOU) Hit the most brawny guy with my friend kenny in the jaw
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-02 21:17:57 |
Genghis
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CHAPTER 2 : THE MYSTERY "What the hell is wrong with you?" You ask them. You hold your baseball bat menacingly, preparing to strike. Thomas takes the initiative and pulls the bat out of your hand. You try your best to throw a punch, but Ramone comes at you from the side. Tabby opens the door and Thomas shoves you outside. As you are thrown out on the porch, he tosses you the bat. Tabby then closes the door. The blinds are then pulled, and you hear hushed whispers inside the lodge. What have I done, you think to yourself. Oh god, what have I done.. why... no, they just..I...god dammit... you console yourself in your thoughts as you lay there beaten up on the porch. After a few minutes, you pick yourself up and stand on the porch. You cannot go back inside, so you'll just have to wait them out. Or something. The cold night air nips at your nose. You pull your clothes close into your body, desperate for warmth. You cannot wait out here, you'll freeze your ass off. You step off the porch into a driveway/clearing sort of area in front of the lodge. You see 3 separate paths. A. Walk on the path to the shed B. Walk back to the front entrance C. Walk around the lodge's left side D. Walk around the lodge's right side
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-02 21:22:51 |
Okabe Rintarou ( AKA Hououin Kyouma)
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A : Before going smash all the windows you can and make lots of property damage then run to the shed but make sure kenny does not get hurt
Edited 4/2/2016 21:28:40
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Mystery/Thriller Zork: 2016-04-02 21:45:08 |
Okabe Rintarou ( AKA Hououin Kyouma)
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A (stop trolling genghis senpai)
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